help where's the close topic button gone off to?

Xterious

bleh

Last edited by Xterious (Sept. 25, 2018 01:12:43)

Xterious

FOR STAFF: REVIEWING TEMPLATE: GAMES
Note: scores are out of 10. final score is score average, rounded down to the 2nd decimal place.

Difficulty: (some notes)
Engagement: (some notes)
Sound: (some notes)
Art: (some notes)
Ease of Use: (some notes)
Instructions: (some notes)
Speed: (some notes)
Storyline: (some notes)
Originality: (some notes)
Lag/Glitches: (some notes)
Transitions: (some notes)

Last edited by Xterious (April 19, 2018 02:24:34)

Riddle_Man

Xterious wrote:
Riddle_Man wrote:
Nobody's going to order from your shop if you don't make it more proffessional. You need to say: We have code, backdrops, and music.
Maybe order a banner from a shop, describe the quality and speed of your products. Although it's easier not to have order forms, it is more professional. You can hire some people so that you don't have to do all the orders.

You can become more professional if you have a review from your product that you sold. So I'm going to order something and when it's done I'll leave a review. I want a backdrop that is a nighttime scene with grass ground.
alright

Also- I wasn't trying to be bossy, just trying to boost your shop up a bit. It looks like you made the description of your shop a lot better!

Xterious

I reserve this post for future use.

Last edited by Xterious (March 26, 2018 21:10:38)

Xterious

Riddle_Man wrote:
Nobody's going to order from your shop if you don't make it more proffessional. You need to say: We have code, backdrops, and music.
Maybe order a banner from a shop, describe the quality and speed of your products. Although it's easier not to have order forms, it is more professional. You can hire some people so that you don't have to do all the orders.

You can become more professional if you have a review from your product that you sold. So I'm going to order something and when it's done I'll leave a review. I want a backdrop that is a nighttime scene with grass ground.

done. http://i68.tinypic.com/rmmaft.png sorry if the moon looks a little weird, I was doing based off of 2/22's moon.

Last edited by Xterious (March 24, 2018 02:47:49)

Riddle_Man

wow! you made this way more professional. I'll leave my review later. Thanks!

Riddle_Man

i can't see the backdrop, could you maybe put it in a scratch project and reply to this with the link?

mrbumppo

Username: @mrbumppo
Skills (art, code, etc.): Vector Art and Code.
Activity level (1-10): 10
Example of your work: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/211523206/
Other: I like to make platformers.

Last edited by mrbumppo (March 24, 2018 12:38:57)

Riddle_Man

Riddle_Man wrote:
i can't see the backdrop, could you maybe put it in a scratch project and reply to this with the link?

Oh nevermind, now I can see it. Thanks, here's my review:

The backdrop was exactly like a said, just perfect! Great quality, vector, and just what I wanted. The moon was shaped a bit funny, but otherwise, it was great!

BlackJackDude

Username: @BlackJackDude
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!

Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…

Last edited by BlackJackDude (March 24, 2018 19:57:39)

Xterious

BlackJackDude wrote:
Username: @BlackJackDude
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…

Hey, you should combine the backdrop and code forms. Then I might be able to get it done.

Xterious

bump

Last edited by Xterious (April 17, 2018 01:48:16)

BlackJackDude

Xterious wrote:
BlackJackDude wrote:
Username: @BlackJackDude
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…
Hey, you should combine the backdrop and code forms. Then I might be able to get it done.

Ok! Here it is:

Username: @BlackJackDude
Colors: Red, Blue
Foreground (small objects such as people): Nothin'
Main/Background: A striped pattern, maybe moving stripes?
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!

Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…

Don't feel pressure to get it right! I can edit it later.

Xterious

BlackJackDude wrote:
Xterious wrote:
BlackJackDude wrote:
Username: @BlackJackDude
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…
Hey, you should combine the backdrop and code forms. Then I might be able to get it done.

Ok! Here it is:

Username: @BlackJackDude
Colors: Red, Blue
Foreground (small objects such as people): Nothin'
Main/Background: A striped pattern, maybe moving stripes?
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…

Don't feel pressure to get it right! I can edit it later.

OK!

Xterious

Xterious wrote:
BlackJackDude wrote:
Xterious wrote:
BlackJackDude wrote:
Username: @BlackJackDude
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…
Hey, you should combine the backdrop and code forms. Then I might be able to get it done.

Ok! Here it is:

Username: @BlackJackDude
Colors: Red, Blue
Foreground (small objects such as people): Nothin'
Main/Background: A striped pattern, maybe moving stripes?
What you want it to do: A cool and unique intro for my projects!
Complexity(1-10): 3
Other: Would like it to have my username on it…

Don't feel pressure to get it right! I can edit it later.
OK!

Done. https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/212378091/

NickVBen

Username:NickVBen
What you want it to do: Draw a line with custom length
Complexity(1-10): 4
Other: color does not matter

ncro2005

Hi!

Just wanted to remind you, since you removed the watermark, please mention “Made by @ncro2005 with Canva”, (You would have to mention me anyway if you didn't.), thank you.

ncro2005

Invitation to join the SPA (Shop Partnership Association)
We think that you are worthy of joining the SPA! Your shop is fast, which is one of the major things we look for. To accept this invitation go to here. If you don’t want to join then that is ok. Once you have joined all you need to do is add a specific BBCode to your partnerships list. You will be advertised by over 18 shops that are already members! We hope that you accept this great opportunity for extensive growth!
Yes, you will get to partner with @hellounicorns2 and all of the other members!

Xterious

ncro2005 wrote:
Hi!
Just wanted to remind you, since you removed the watermark, please mention “Made by @ncro2005 with Canva”, (You would have to mention me anyway if you didn't.), thank you.

done

ncro2005 wrote:
Invitation to join the SPA (Shop Partnership Association)
We think that you are worthy of joining the SPA! Your shop is fast, which is one of the major things we look for. To accept this invitation go to here. If you don’t want to join then that is ok. Once you have joined all you need to do is add a specific BBCode to your partnerships list. You will be advertised by over 18 shops that are already members! We hope that you accept this great opportunity for extensive growth!
Yes, you will get to partner with @hellounicorns2 and all of the other members!

and done

Last edited by Xterious (March 26, 2018 21:07:22)

Xterious

NickVBen wrote:
Username:NickVBen
What you want it to do: Draw a line with custom length
Complexity(1-10): 4
Other: color does not matter

define line (length)
pen down
move (length) steps
pen up

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