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MistickMage

Can I take the Achievements button?

bigpuppy

nickeljorn wrote:
Full username: Nickeljorn
Link to what you want reviewed: My parody of the Vocaloid song 1 2 Fanclub
Type of thing you want reviewed: The project in general
Comments: (anything else?) Enjoy the animation!

Taken.

bigpuppy

Review for 1 2 Fanclub Meme/PMV by Nickeljorn
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Coding (98/100)
It was well-timed and very well coding!

Graphics (84/100)
The graphics could have been just a teensy bit better, but they are fine the way they are in my opinion!

Bugs (100/100)
I couldn't find any!

Grammar (100/100)
There wasn't many words (other than the song) in the actual project, but the grammar/spelling in the Notes and Credits was very good.

Creativity (80/100)
I have seen a lot of stuff like this, but that doesn't mean I don't like your project! I love it! :)

Improvements that could be made:
Maybe better outline in the notes what this is about?
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Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop

Edit: This was finished order #123 :O

Last edited by bigpuppy (April 7, 2017 02:03:08)

GeeTransit

MistickMage wrote:
Can I take the Achievements button?

Updated!

MistickMage

GeeTransit wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Can I take the Achievements button?
Updated!

Done. https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/140725105/#player

Midnight999meow

Imaginizer wrote:
Full username: Midnight999meow
Type of Idea: For Series One of an animation series. It has to be about cats. No violence/magic/supernatural stuff. One rule: part of it has to be in a school.
Comments: (anything else?)

I will take it, just nee to know if the cats can be personified

They can be just shadows because I'll colour them.

bigpuppy

MistickMage wrote:
GeeTransit wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Can I take the Achievements button?
Updated!
Done. https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/140725105/#player

Nice job! It wasn't the right type of rounded square so I changed it for you.

MistickMage

bigpuppy wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
GeeTransit wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Can I take the Achievements button?
Updated!
Done. https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/140725105/#player
Nice job! It wasn't the right type of rounded square so I changed it for you.

Ok, thanks

bigpuppy

MistickMage wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
GeeTransit wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Can I take the Achievements button?
Updated!
Done. https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/140725105/#player
Nice job! It wasn't the right type of rounded square so I changed it for you.
Ok, thanks

I added it to the FP.

hedgehog_blue

My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)

bigpuppy

hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)

Lol! Whatever I change it to, someone can't see it! I guess I'll change it to normal characters then

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Last edited by bigpuppy (April 7, 2017 16:01:54)

-Puppy

hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)

Yeah, but I got used to it. Bigpuppy, why don't you call it Bigpuppy's Shop | THE FOURTH LARGEST SHOP

bigpuppy

-Puppy wrote:
hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)
Yeah, but I got used to it. Bigpuppy, why don't you call it Bigpuppy's Shop | THE FOURTH LARGEST SHOP

But I changed it to regular characters now so all browsers can see it

furrypig

bigpuppy wrote:
-Puppy wrote:
hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)
Yeah, but I got used to it. Bigpuppy, why don't you call it Bigpuppy's Shop | THE FOURTH LARGEST SHOP
But I changed it to regular characters now so all browsers can see it

The title is often cut off because of space, so the only thing shown is, say in messages, “there were new posts in FOURTH LARGEST SHOP ON SCRATCH |…” and people often see the start of the sentence first, not knowing the name. The best way would probably be “Bigpuppy's Shop | 4th largest shop on scratch | Over 120 orders completed”

bigpuppy

furrypig wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
-Puppy wrote:
hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)
Yeah, but I got used to it. Bigpuppy, why don't you call it Bigpuppy's Shop | THE FOURTH LARGEST SHOP
But I changed it to regular characters now so all browsers can see it
The title is often cut off because of space, so the only thing shown is, say in messages, “there were new posts in FOURTH LARGEST SHOP ON SCRATCH |…” and people often see the start of the sentence first, not knowing the name. The best way would probably be “Bigpuppy's Shop | 4th largest shop on scratch | Over 120 orders completed”

alright xD

jakel181

Yay You changed it

hedgehog_blue

The name changes again :P

Can I join the shop? Form:

Username? Hedgehog_Blue
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)? Art, Scripts, Reviews, BBCode
What is your favorite animal? Hedgehogs, Pigs, Cats and Dogs.
Example(s) of work? Find all my stuff here (Also a good art example)
Are you following this topic? Yes
How many shops are you an employee at? Pup Maina, the Gog Shop.

Thanks for considering this :)

I really want to get in, so if there is something I should do to prove my skills, tell me.
I hope this is good enough.

bigpuppy

hedgehog_blue wrote:
The name changes again :P

Can I join the shop? Form:

Username? Hedgehog_Blue
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)? Art, Scripts, Reviews, BBCode
What is your favorite animal? Hedgehogs, Pigs, Cats and Dogs.
Example(s) of work? Find all my stuff here (Also a good art example)
Are you following this topic? Yes
How many shops are you an employee at? Pup Maina, the Gog Shop.

Thanks for considering this :)

I really want to get in, so if there is something I should do to prove my skills, tell me.
I hope this is good enough.

Hired! Honestly, even if you didn't give an example of work, I would still hire you because I know your skills from the Gog Shop.

-Puppy

bigpuppy wrote:
furrypig wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
-Puppy wrote:
hedgehog_blue wrote:
My browser doesn't support the characters in the title. I've somehow started to think of the name of this shop as “fourth largest shop.” Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion :)
Yeah, but I got used to it. Bigpuppy, why don't you call it Bigpuppy's Shop | THE FOURTH LARGEST SHOP
But I changed it to regular characters now so all browsers can see it
The title is often cut off because of space, so the only thing shown is, say in messages, “there were new posts in FOURTH LARGEST SHOP ON SCRATCH |…” and people often see the start of the sentence first, not knowing the name. The best way would probably be “Bigpuppy's Shop | 4th largest shop on scratch | Over 120 orders completed”
alright xD

that was what i was talking about in the first place

bigpuppy

Please respond to the roll call, everyone! Everyone that joined after it was started doesn't have to.

Last edited by bigpuppy (April 7, 2017 18:19:35)

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