HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Yeah, that's a good idea. I'll give him a lot of gadgets and the sequel can be less grounded

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Yeah, that's a good idea. I'll give him a lot of gadgets and the sequel can be less grounded

Maybe add in hints to more fantastical Batman characters, like there being rumblings about Clayface or Man Bat.

boom2ratz wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Yeah, that's a good idea. I'll give him a lot of gadgets and the sequel can be less grounded

Maybe add in hints to more fantastical Batman characters, like there being rumblings about Clayface or Man Bat.

Yeah, good idea. I was even considering those two or Mad Hatter for the sequel.

boom2ratz wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Yeah, that's a good idea. I'll give him a lot of gadgets and the sequel can be less grounded

Maybe add in hints to more fantastical Batman characters, like there being rumblings about Clayface or Man Bat.

Yeah, good idea. I was even considering those two or Mad Hatter for the sequel.

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Yeah, that's a good idea. I'll give him a lot of gadgets and the sequel can be less grounded

Maybe add in hints to more fantastical Batman characters, like there being rumblings about Clayface or Man Bat.

Yeah, good idea. I was even considering those two or Mad Hatter for the sequel.

Can he have an actual cave for the Batcave? He hasn't had that since TDKR.

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

-Exelsior- wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump. I'll just post it here and please give it a read with an open mind, I know it's grounded and I'm aware of some slight similarities with TBM, but i tried to do something different with it which I can explain if you'd like. But here is the outline I thought of a couple months ago:

I reread the story and it is less similar in terms of the actual plot, but the themes and tone are very similar. An ultra grounded Batman story about the corruption in the police force is incredibly similar. Obviously, don't change the themes of the story, those are what matter most, but maybe the tone could be a bit less grounded?

Maybe a bit less Battison and more Miller Year One?