Scratch Movie: Quest for Bugs

VUIE68

TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
Where can I find a full script?

you mean the full script for part 1 of the movie? welp, from what i know, there isn't.

edit: king of page YET AGAIN

Last edited by VUIE68 (Jan. 22, 2025 19:08:21)

ThisIsTemp1

VUIE68 wrote:
TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
As a non-writer, I’ll do what I can. (I’m sorry this isn’t my job )

Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way!
Nano: Yes.
Gobo: Absolutely.
Tera: Definitely.
Pico: Yup.
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Why do they need to go to studio mall? To watch the news or something?
im not a director but i dont get it…

They go to the studio mall because it's the safest place that Scratch Cat could think of to gather as the earthquake and sandstorm happen.

VUIE68

Ik i'm not a writer but here is a possible continuation:

Scratch Cat, Gobo and Pico watch all the drama happen while everyone screams and bugs come out.
Pico suddenly finds multiple bugs and steps on them.

Pico: What in the world is goin' on in here?!
Gobo: I actually don't know, maybe we should check the news? I heard that there is actually a TV at Studio Mall. Let's check if it's turned on.
Scratch Cat: Great idea, Gobo!

The three go into Studio Mall to see if the TV has turned on. It shows that it has been turned on, but the visuals are really glitchy, almost like the graphics of a burried VCR you randomly found from 1986.

Gobo: Whaaaaaatt?? Why is the TV's quality so low?!
Scratch Cat: Hmmm… It seems like it's ACTUALLY the news that's broadcasting.

TV: !!BREAKING NEWS!! SCRATCHTOPIA IS FILLED WITH BUGS AND IS CURRENTLY IN DANGER.
News Cat: This broadcast is extremely important. Please do not turn the TV off. Scratchtopia is currently in a state we have never seen before. Sandstorms and an army of bugs are attacking Scratchtopia right now. We have even seen traces of three people getting flung away by the storm.

Gobo: MY GOSH! That's Tera, Giga and Nano right there!!
Scratch Cat: Yeah..

News Cat: If you find more traces of people being victims of this horrible disaster, please call our number. Thank you for your attention.
The TV blinks and then cuts to static.

I think this is good enough.

zeldatheaxolotl

VUIE68 wrote:
zeldatheaxolotl wrote:
ThisIsTemp1 wrote:
ThisIsTemp1 wrote:
Next scene: The friends debate whether they should go home or not. Eventually, they decide to go home but before that a crack is shown that the groups skips, over, but an earthquake and sandstorm happens, splitting up the group. Scratch Cat calls them and tells them to meet at the Studio Mall, but when they get there, they notice many bugs entering the building as people flee and disappear. A studio raid's happening!

Writers, please flesh out these details so that I can make a story-board.
Bump. Please, can I have it by Monday writers?
Okay
Scratch cat:should we go home
Giga: no
Nano:yes
Gobo:yes
Tera: yes
Pico: yes
The group skips the crack but then a sand storm/earthquake happens and nano Giga and Tera get flung away
Scratch cat: let’s meet up at studio mall
Everyone goes to the studio mall but sees lots of bugs and running people
Someone can make the rest
Not bad, but how can scratch cat not REALIZE that nano, giga and tera are literally getting flung away by the storm?!

He’s trying to stay calm and pretended to not notice it

TheAutocorrectingCat

Scratch Cat, Gobo and Pico watch all the drama unfold while everyone screams and bugs chase them around.
Pico steps on the bugs as fast as possible.

Pico: What in the world is going on in here?!
Gobo: I don't know, maybe we should check the news? I heard that there’s a TV at the Studio Mall. Let's see if it's turned on.
Scratch Cat: Great idea!

The three go into the Studio Mall to see if the TV is turned on. It turns on, but the visuals are really glitchy, almost like the graphics of a very old VCR.

Gobo: Whaaaat? Why is the TV so low-quality?
Scratch Cat: Hmmm… It seems like it's broadcasting news.

TV: BREAKING NEWS SCRATCHTOPIA IS FILLED WITH BUGS AND IS CURRENTLY IN DANGER.
News Cat: This broadcast is extremely important. Please do not turn your TV off. Scratchtopia is currently in a never-seen-before state. Sandstorms and an army of bugs are attacking Scratchtopia right now. We have seen traces of three victims of the storm, all being flung away.

Gobo: OH MY GOSH! That's Tera, Giga and Nano!
Scratch Cat: Yeah…

News Cat: If you find more traces of the victims, please call our number. Thank you for your attention.
The TV glitches and then cuts to static.

I tried my hand at a possible edit, though it seems fine as it is.

Last edited by TheAutocorrectingCat (Jan. 22, 2025 19:36:20)

TheAutocorrectingCat

Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way!
Nano: Yes.
Gobo: Absolutely.
Tera: Definitely.
Pico: Yup.
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!

TheAutocorrectingCat

What do you want to be?: Writer/Editor
How much experience do you have in that? Could you show some examples? (links): See my above posts where I edited some scripts.
What makes you think you are good for this role?: I’ve won a couple of writing awards in my school, and I used to write books to sell for money. I’m also on the forums often, and…ever wonder why my username is what it is? (one of my most famous books is Rhombi)
Are you confident in getting accepted? Why: I’m not sure, because the role is closed. Maybe, just maybe.
(Note: I know this is closed, I can always just edit the scripts if that’s okay. My stupid OCD is like, “No no no, EDIT. See mistake? EDIT. Word was said more than 2 times? FATAL ERROR. MUST CORRECT.)

GvYoutube

Don't ask how or why, but I put it on spotify. Kinda (green text btw)

TheAutocorrectingCat

GvYoutube wrote:

Don't ask how or why, but I put it on spotify. Kinda (green text btw)

why you no premium

GvYoutube

TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
GvYoutube wrote:

Don't ask how or why, but I put it on spotify. Kinda (green text btw)
why you no premium

because me no money only eight dolla

mali3000

VUIE68 wrote:
Ik i'm not a writer but here is a possible continuation:
Scratch Cat, Gobo and Pico watch all the drama happen while everyone screams and bugs come out.
Pico suddenly finds multiple bugs and steps on them.

Pico: What in the world is goin' on in here?!
Gobo: I actually don't know, maybe we should check the news? I heard that there is actually a TV at Studio Mall. Let's check if it's turned on.
Scratch Cat: Great idea, Gobo!

The three go into Studio Mall to see if the TV has turned on. It shows that it has been turned on, but the visuals are really glitchy, almost like the graphics of a burried VCR you randomly found from 1986.

Gobo: Whaaaaaatt?? Why is the TV's quality so low?!
Scratch Cat: Hmmm… It seems like it's ACTUALLY the news that's broadcasting.

TV: !!BREAKING NEWS!! SCRATCHTOPIA IS FILLED WITH BUGS AND IS CURRENTLY IN DANGER.
News Cat: This broadcast is extremely important. Please do not turn the TV off. Scratchtopia is currently in a state we have never seen before. Sandstorms and an army of bugs are attacking Scratchtopia right now. We have even seen traces of three people getting flung away by the storm.

Gobo: MY GOSH! That's Tera, Giga and Nano right there!!
Scratch Cat: Yeah..

News Cat: If you find more traces of people being victims of this horrible disaster, please call our number. Thank you for your attention.
The TV blinks and then cuts to static.

I think this is good enough.

i love it! see guys this is what the scripts should be like u_u
do you wanna do the storyboard orrr can i

mali3000

TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way!
Nano: Yes.
Gobo: Absolutely.
Tera: Definitely.
Pico: Yup.
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!

i think they should have an argument/discussion for this part instead of just saying variations of yes or no

GvYoutube

VUIE68 wrote:
Ik i'm not a writer but here is a possible continuation:
Scratch Cat, Gobo and Pico watch all the drama happen while everyone screams and bugs come out.
Pico suddenly finds multiple bugs and steps on them.

Pico: What in the world is goin' on in here?!
Gobo: I actually don't know, maybe we should check the news? I heard that there is actually a TV at Studio Mall. Let's check if it's turned on.
Scratch Cat: Great idea, Gobo!

The three go into Studio Mall to see if the TV has turned on. It shows that it has been turned on, but the visuals are really glitchy, almost like the graphics of a burried VCR you randomly found from 1986.

Gobo: Whaaaaaatt?? Why is the TV's quality so low?!
Scratch Cat: Hmmm… It seems like it's ACTUALLY the news that's broadcasting.

TV: !!BREAKING NEWS!! SCRATCHTOPIA IS FILLED WITH BUGS AND IS CURRENTLY IN DANGER.
News Cat: This broadcast is extremely important. Please do not turn the TV off. Scratchtopia is currently in a state we have never seen before. Sandstorms and an army of bugs are attacking Scratchtopia right now. We have even seen traces of three people getting flung away by the storm.

Gobo: MY GOSH! That's Tera, Giga and Nano right there!!
Scratch Cat: Yeah..

News Cat: If you find more traces of people being victims of this horrible disaster, please call our number. Thank you for your attention.
The TV blinks and then cuts to static.

I think this is good enough.

i made concept lines

mali3000

ooooh voice actors isnt this storyboard so appeaaallling to voooice
you knnoooow you want to

VUIE68

GvYoutube wrote:
VUIE68 wrote:
Ik i'm not a writer but here is a possible continuation:
Scratch Cat, Gobo and Pico watch all the drama happen while everyone screams and bugs come out.
Pico suddenly finds multiple bugs and steps on them.

Pico: What in the world is goin' on in here?!
Gobo: I actually don't know, maybe we should check the news? I heard that there is actually a TV at Studio Mall. Let's check if it's turned on.
Scratch Cat: Great idea, Gobo!

The three go into Studio Mall to see if the TV has turned on. It shows that it has been turned on, but the visuals are really glitchy, almost like the graphics of a burried VCR you randomly found from 1986.

Gobo: Whaaaaaatt?? Why is the TV's quality so low?!
Scratch Cat: Hmmm… It seems like it's ACTUALLY the news that's broadcasting.

TV: !!BREAKING NEWS!! SCRATCHTOPIA IS FILLED WITH BUGS AND IS CURRENTLY IN DANGER.
News Cat: This broadcast is extremely important. Please do not turn the TV off. Scratchtopia is currently in a state we have never seen before. Sandstorms and an army of bugs are attacking Scratchtopia right now. We have even seen traces of three people getting flung away by the storm.

Gobo: MY GOSH! That's Tera, Giga and Nano right there!!
Scratch Cat: Yeah..

News Cat: If you find more traces of people being victims of this horrible disaster, please call our number. Thank you for your attention.
The TV blinks and then cuts to static.

I think this is good enough.
i made concept lines

THAT ACTUALLY SOUNDS LIKE AN ACTUAL NEWS REPORTER BRO GOOD JOB

ToastRoastBoast

mali3000 wrote:
TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way! I cant wait to go home
Nano: Yes. just yes
Gobo: Absolutely. we can focus on other things
Tera: Definitely. home is a yes-go
Pico: Yup.
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!
i think they should have an argument/discussion for this part instead of just saying variations of yes or no

i made them discuss

GvYoutube

mali3000 wrote:
ooooh voice actors isnt this storyboard so appeaaallling to voooice
you knnoooow you want to

Fine

TheAutocorrectingCat

mali3000 wrote:
TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way!
Nano: Yes.
Gobo: Absolutely.
Tera: Definitely.
Pico: Yup.
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!
i think they should have an argument/discussion for this part instead of just saying variations of yes or no

Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way! I think we should just st-
Nano: We should go.
Gobo: Absolutely, yes. Giga, what is wrong with you?!
Giga: I think we should ju-
Tera: Definitely. home is a yes-go
Pico: Let's go!
Giga: Can we-
(The group moves on without her. She sighs and then follows them.)
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!

How about this?

Last edited by TheAutocorrectingCat (Jan. 22, 2025 21:21:34)

ToastRoastBoast

TheAutocorrectingCat wrote:
Scratch Cat: Should we go home, guys?
Giga: No way! I think we should just st-
Nano: We should go.
Gobo: Absolutely, yes. Giga, what is wrong with you?!
Giga: I think we should ju-
Tera: Definitely. home is a yes-go
Pico: Let's go!
Giga: Can we-
(The group moves on without her. She sighs and then follows them.)
(The group skips over the crack but then an earthquake/storm happens and Nano, Giga, and Tera get flung away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no! We need to get to the Studio Mall, ASAP!
(Everyone goes to the studio mall. On the way, the pass lots of bugs and people running away.)
Scratch Cat: Oh no…it’s a-
Tera: STUDIO RAID!
Giga: I KNEW we should’ve stayed!

How about this?

100/10 its good

TheAutocorrectingCat

GvYoutube wrote:
mali3000 wrote:
ooooh voice actors isnt this storyboard so appeaaallling to voooice
you knnoooow you want to
Fine

can't I'm sick

But I will when I get my voice back

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