Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy.

Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy.

Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy.

Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room. A rubber room. A rubber room with rats. And rats make me crazy.

this is just to help stop more leaks

sigh

HexagonWorld wrote:

I FIGURED OUT HOW TO MERGE THE THEMES OF FASCISM I WANT TO EXPLORE WITH CLARK'S ARC

THIS TOOK WAY TOO LONG

I still have no idea what to do with Lois though, please help

Bump. Please help

HexagonWorld wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

I FIGURED OUT HOW TO MERGE THE THEMES OF FASCISM I WANT TO EXPLORE WITH CLARK'S ARC

THIS TOOK WAY TOO LONG

I still have no idea what to do with Lois though, please help

Bump. Please help

Pull a Superman Returns and just have her believe the world is better off without Superman.

Matjam02 wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

I FIGURED OUT HOW TO MERGE THE THEMES OF FASCISM I WANT TO EXPLORE WITH CLARK'S ARC

THIS TOOK WAY TOO LONG

I still have no idea what to do with Lois though, please help

Bump. Please help

Pull a Superman Returns and just have her believe the world is better off without Superman.

Yeah

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

Can we give my grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

HexagonWorld wrote:

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

Great ideas, just didn't understand who exactly votes for Metropolis to be bottled
Also with the “can't punch away fascism”, you kinda can, just make Superman defeat Brainiac and all his goons and go through his character arc

boom2ratz wrote:

Great ideas, just didn't understand who exactly votes for Metropolis to be bottled
Also with the “can't punch away fascism”, you kinda can, just make Superman defeat Brainiac and all his goons and go through his character arc

The people of Metropolis.
Yeah, he can punch away Brainiac, but that makes it seem like all that's necessary to stop fascism is someone who can punch one guy hard enough.

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Great ideas, just didn't understand who exactly votes for Metropolis to be bottled
Also with the “can't punch away fascism”, you kinda can, just make Superman defeat Brainiac and all his goons and go through his character arc

The people of Metropolis.
Yeah, he can punch away Brainiac, but that makes it seem like all that's necessary to stop fascism is someone who can punch one guy hard enough.

…Why?
That's the only way to go with that type of movie.

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Great ideas, just didn't understand who exactly votes for Metropolis to be bottled
Also with the “can't punch away fascism”, you kinda can, just make Superman defeat Brainiac and all his goons and go through his character arc

The people of Metropolis.
Yeah, he can punch away Brainiac, but that makes it seem like all that's necessary to stop fascism is someone who can punch one guy hard enough.

…Why?
That's the only way to go with that type of movie.

Brainiac promises them security and safety and peace.

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my old grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Great ideas, just didn't understand who exactly votes for Metropolis to be bottled
Also with the “can't punch away fascism”, you kinda can, just make Superman defeat Brainiac and all his goons and go through his character arc

The people of Metropolis.
Yeah, he can punch away Brainiac, but that makes it seem like all that's necessary to stop fascism is someone who can punch one guy hard enough.

…Why?
That's the only way to go with that type of movie.

Brainiac promises them security and safety and peace.

I would have to suspend my disbelief but I guess that works

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my old grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump

I just think it's too similar to TBM.

HexagonWorld wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

boom2ratz wrote:

Can we give my old grounded Batman story a chance. It's the only one I have any ideas for, I promise I won't make Batman always grounded

Bump

I just think it's too similar to TBM.

The only similarities I really see is a bomb at the funeral of a corrupt official

hello

are you trying to make a perfe

HexagonWorld wrote:

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

are you trying to make a perfect superman story

ym16xs wrote:

are you trying to make a perfe

HexagonWorld wrote:

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

are you trying to make a perfect superman story

… yes?

HexagonWorld wrote:

ym16xs wrote:

are you trying to make a perfe

HexagonWorld wrote:

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

are you trying to make a perfect Superman story

… yes?

cause your focusing on characters

ym16xs wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

ym16xs wrote:

are you trying to make a perfe

HexagonWorld wrote:

I've had some motivation for Superman lately, but I'm having trouble compiling my ideas into a cohesive story, plus there are still some issues that need to be resolved before I can start writing the full story.

- The movie is about fascism.
- Act 1 is Earth based, sets up status quo for Superman. Superman's about 6 months in, but people are still demoralized and hopeless. Lex has implemented the BRAINIAC protocol, a harsh security system, throughout Metropolis. End of Act 1, it's revealed that Brainiac is actually an alien and puts it to a vote whether Metropolis is bottled or not.
- Midpoint of Act 2, Metropolis votes yes. This demoralizes Superman as Metropolis is shrunken. Lex is given control of Metropolis by Brainiac, while Brainiac gets to rule the Coluan Empire. Brainiac is textbook fascist, obsessed with purity, promises security at the cost of removing those he deems weak. Brainiac and Lex are disgusted by Superman “wasting his strength” protecting people instead of ruling over them.
- Clark's arc through the film is accepting both sides of himself, Clark Kent and Kal-El and synthesizing them into a fully realized Superman. He starts out with the Morrison Action Comics costume, and ends wearing Kryptonian garb, but with the cape from his original costume added. Antithesis of Brainiac's fascism.
- Issues: Can't punch away fascism, has to be a more realistic solution that still fits the tone of a Superman story. How does Clark actually accept that he is both human and Kryptonian? What are Lois and the rest of the Daily Planet cast doing (what is Lois's arc?)

Any suggestions and solutions for the issues?

are you trying to make a perfect Superman story

… yes?

cause your focusing on characters

What are you talking about?