zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#522)
Help this is dead

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

lol let’s just put famous warrior comics in it because we have way more than enough comics so I had to make a novel instead here are some famous comics I know of eternal apprentice: this comic is always on front page lots of people would appreciate us putting this in the movie tales of perfectheart: this comic has endless characters and is sweet the creator of eternal apprentice is even a fan flying in the dark: sorry for giving you a chapter with blood but it’s hard to review not in a bad way

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

Ummm are we adding words to the credits or have just music if yes am i writing it because I’m a script writer
do we even have credits!!!!!

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
lol let’s just put famous warrior comics in it because we have way more than enough comics so I had to make a novel instead here are some famous comics I know of eternal apprentice: this comic is always on front page lots of people would appreciate us putting this in the movie tales of perfectheart: this comic has endless characters and is sweet the creator of eternal apprentice is even a fan flying in the dark: sorry for giving you a chapter with blood but it’s hard to review not in a bad way

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
Ummm are we adding words to the credits or have just music if yes am i writing it because I’m a script writer
do we even have credits!!!!!

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
lol let’s just put famous warrior comics in it because we have way more than enough comics so I had to make a novel instead here are some famous comics I know of eternal apprentice: this comic is always on front page lots of people would appreciate us putting this in the movie tales of perfectheart: this comic has endless characters and is sweet the creator of eternal apprentice is even a fan flying in the dark: sorry for giving you a chapter with blood but it’s hard to review not in a bad way

uh

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
Ummm are we adding words to the credits or have just music if yes am i writing it because I’m a script writer
do we even have credits!!!!!

yes, we will have credits, but idk anyone that's a singer

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

Well, it has better pacing, less errors and stuff…
But even then I'm not sure how going to the moon would fit in the context of the movie

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#531)

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

Well, it has better pacing, less errors and stuff…
But even then I'm not sure how going to the moon would fit in the context of the movie

Great the creator thinks someone’s rip off of my script is better might as well get fired and they replace me

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#531)

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

Well, it has better pacing, less errors and stuff…
But even then I'm not sure how going to the moon would fit in the context of the movie

Great the creator thinks someone’s rip off of my script is better might as well get fired and they replace me

It's not really a “ripoff”, and that isn't something you should get fired for…

set width to (0) aligned [left v] :: pen // No text will actually show, but the sprite will still disappear.
show text [%20no%20text%20will%20actually%20show,%20but%20the%20sprite%20will%20still%20disappear_] :: pen

abdavark wrote:

(#532)
What if they go to Scratch Labs and it's overrun by bugs and in ruins and stuff? Even as a small scene
Remember that in the animated text extension the “show text ()” block replaces the sprite and they have to use the “show sprite” block when that happens. The bugs could use it against them and even use:

set width to (0) aligned [left v] :: pen // No text will actually show, but the sprite will still disappear.
show text [%20no%20text%20will%20actually%20show,%20but%20the%20sprite%20will%20still%20disappear_] :: pen

(On second thought, Scratch Labs can change quickly, and the animated text extension could be removed from Scratch Labs and added to Scratch. Hmm…)

Also, can I be a brainstormer? I can't give an example, but… please?


And who is this Kaj guy that we're using as the antagonist? I've been on Scratch for as long as I can remember and I've never heard of him.
Also, could someone please define “kumquat”? I get the joke, but I don't know what they are.

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

abdavark wrote:

*quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats*
And who is this Kaj person that we're using as the antagonist? I've been on Scratch for as long as I can remember and I've never heard of them.
Also, could someone please define “kumquat”? I get the joke, but I don't know what they are.

Kaj is a person from the 1.x era, back in the very early days of Scratch. Kaj never got views on her projects, so she got angry, and threatened that she was going to hack people's accounts and get “revenge” on Scratch. It was all bluffing, and kaj got banned forever, never to come back. This has led kaj to become some sort of evil figure in Scratch, scary and hacky and glitchy,

A kumquat is just a ripoff orange, closer to a tangerine as far as I know.

abdavark wrote:

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

abdavark wrote:

*quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats*
And who is this Kaj person that we're using as the antagonist? I've been on Scratch for as long as I can remember and I've never heard of them.
Also, could someone please define “kumquat”? I get the joke, but I don't know what they are.

Kaj is a person from the 1.x era, back in the very early days of Scratch. Kaj never got views on her projects, so she got angry, and threatened that she was going to hack people's accounts and get “revenge” on Scratch. It was all bluffing, and kaj got banned forever, never to come back. This has led kaj to become some sort of evil figure in Scratch, scary and hacky and glitchy,

A kumquat is just a ripoff orange, closer to a tangerine as far as I know.

Thank you!
Maybe we should put some backstory about Kaj in the movie, for the young people who probably don't know who she is. What if she explains everything at the climax?

See, kumquats? You don't have to be evil, signature-eating kumquats. You can be good, unnecessarily-long-unnecessary-quote-eating kumquats!

DifferentDance8 wrote:

Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats
I am 99% sure Kaj is a he, but I don't know fully about that part.
Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats

abdavark wrote:

(#536)

DifferentDance8 wrote:

Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats
I am 99% sure Kaj is a he, but I don't know fully about that part.
Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats

I thought so at first, too. But scratchcode1_2_3 said “she”, so…

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

Well, it has better pacing, less errors and stuff…
But even then I'm not sure how going to the moon would fit in the context of the movie

abdavark wrote:

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

abdavark wrote:

*quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats*
And who is this Kaj person that we're using as the antagonist? I've been on Scratch for as long as I can remember and I've never heard of them.
Also, could someone please define “kumquat”? I get the joke, but I don't know what they are.

Kaj is a person from the 1.x era, back in the very early days of Scratch. Kaj never got views on her projects, so she got angry, and threatened that she was going to hack people's accounts and get “revenge” on Scratch. It was all bluffing, and kaj got banned forever, never to come back. This has led kaj to become some sort of evil figure in Scratch, scary and hacky and glitchy,

A kumquat is just a ripoff orange, closer to a tangerine as far as I know.

Thank you!
Maybe we should put some backstory about Kaj in the movie, for the young people who probably don't know who she is. What if she explains everything at the climax?

See, kumquats? You don't have to be evil, signature-eating kumquats. You can be good, unnecessarily-long-unnecessary-quote-eating kumquats!

greentreebee wrote:

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#529)

greentreebee wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

They are going to the moon and I have a script for that
————————-
I have made some edits.
————————————

Scratch Cat: Pilot of the Rocket // All: “Press the button!” // All: Lunges toward the button and pushes it (the blast off button) // All: Stumbles backwards and braces

All: “Blast off!”

——————-Couple Minutes Into launch———————

Pico, looking out the window: “We're burning!”

All, except SC: Screaming

Scratch cat: “Don't worry, this is normal!”

Tera and Giga: “It is?!”

Scratch cat: “Yes, this is called the atmosphere. Don't worry, we're protected.”

Giga: “Phew.”

Gobo: “Space makes me hungry.”

Nano: “Me too. Lets eat!”

Pico, gets out the food: “What kind of food is this!?”

SC: “It's called space food. I know, it looks gross. But, did you really think astronauts have a fancy dinner in space!?”

Giga, shrugging: “I expected it,”

SC, rolling eyes, and grinning: “Whatever. Enjoy your meal.”

Gobo: “Hmmph!”

————Parallax of them eating in space————-

// After they eat they sit down in the lounge and watch the Earth spin and slowly shrink out of sight //
// They go to bed //

Tera: Wakes up early, walks around and looks out the window. She sees meteors. She screams: “Meteor shower!”

All: Wake up in alarm

SC: Jumps out of bed, Goes to the cockpit with his space captain hat halfway on, and and shouts: “Everyone, get down to the supply bay!” He stays up in the cockpit, alone, and masterfully piloting the spaceship.

// Animation crossed with parallax begins, starring the outside of the ship diving and swerving between the meteors, lasts about 10 seconds //

All, except SC, slams bedroom door simultaneously, all split screen.

Back to SC, sweating, and turning the wheel madly.

That's all for now.



Sorry this post was a bit late

You changed everything

Well, it has better pacing, less errors and stuff…
But even then I'm not sure how going to the moon would fit in the context of the movie

its all i have for now

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

abdavark wrote:

(#536)

DifferentDance8 wrote:

Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats
I am 99% sure Kaj is a he, but I don't know fully about that part.
Quote snipped and eaten by good kumquats

I thought so at first, too. But scratchcode1_2_3 said “she”, so…

Well I've heard in multiple places that kaj is a girl but I think it maybe unknown, ^\_(I_I)_/^

scratchcode1_2_3 wrote:

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
lol let’s just put famous warrior comics in it because we have way more than enough comics so I had to make a novel instead here are some famous comics I know of eternal apprentice: this comic is always on front page lots of people would appreciate us putting this in the movie tales of perfectheart: this comic has endless characters and is sweet the creator of eternal apprentice is even a fan flying in the dark: sorry for giving you a chapter with blood but it’s hard to review not in a bad way

uh

zeldatheaxolotl wrote:

(#525)
Ummm are we adding words to the credits or have just music if yes am i writing it because I’m a script writer
do we even have credits!!!!!

yes, we will have credits, but idk anyone that's a singer