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I Think I Most Want The Parts I Have not seen of it reviewed.
If Something with the clan names go wrong, Such as it calling a clan “Stoneclan” Instead of “Riverclan”, Tell Me In your review.

@2013animals
Her name is Heather. She is somewhere around 11-14.
Personality: Heather doesn't really like to talk. Talking with strangers is a big nope however she does talk a bit with people she trusts. She often uses short sentences. When giving her opinion she will give it as it is no matter how harsh it may sound. Heather is very curious and likes to explore new places that don't have that many people in them. Heather tends to go into decisions without the input of others. She is brave with most things, however she dreads social situations. She is smart and gets grades around A-Bs. Heather enjoys reading and will read just about any fictional genre. One thing she just can not stand is cliches. She hates them with a burning passion. Cliches really bother her, and sometimes she has to restraint herself from complaining about them. She also hates discrimination with the same passion she has for cliches. Heather is easily annoyed by constant abrupt noises. One day she wishes to create something to lessen the amount of cliches and discrimination in the world.
Backstory: When Heather was a child she was loud and rude. This often got her into trouble. Every time she got into trouble it would discourage her to talk a little more until she got as quiet as she is today. Heather joined many different clubs in school. She was specifically attracted to clubs that she had no idea what they were such as Softball , however she was a bit disappointed when she found out it was pretty much just baseball. Now Heather is mostly in clubs that involve creativity such as band and art. As a child she asked a lot of questions for things she didn't understand, and when she didn't understand/ couldn't find an answer she would make up her own myths to explain it. She is an only child. Her dad is at home most of the time. Her mom is rarely at the house as her job keeps her very busy. She also has a dog named March that she got when she was 9. When she was 6 she had a pet fish, however it passed away. She theorized that the fish left on a very important secret mission for the government when her parents never directly answered what happened to her fish.

Id Like Help Making A Character for my warrior cats game, and I Dont just want to use random Name scripts because Its kinda a special Character.
Crystalstar, Leader of Littleclan. She is the third Leader of littleclan And When it comes to food She will do ANYTHING to get her paws on the last squirrel in the fresh-kill pile before anyone else. (I dont know why I Told you that )

Id like a good song for my warrior cats game.
Its The Song That Will Play whenever The player is outside.
Im Going for A Bouncy Mood In the Song. Kind of A Mix of Happy and exited. Not Fast, Though. With Speed I Want it to Kind of be happy.
I Want it to be kind of happy and sticato. (Ive said that its kind of happy three times. ) Id Like it to be good Quality. (Of course. )

Lead Littleclan! Warrior cats
Tittle Screen: The tittle screen is pretty nice. I spent a few minutes listening to the song. However since this is a remix I guess I should mostly focus on the changes and suggestions for improvement. First of all please make that awesome tittle music loop while on the tittle screen. Second of all how you put little on the tittle screen needs some work. You should have it all read out as one word instead of it being lii ttle. I like what you did for the i in little. You should probably change the warriors clan leader to fit in with your little.

Gameplay changes:First of all it opens almost the exact same way it opens in the original. However I find it odd they say Thunderclan instead of Littleclan. Other than that it appears exactly the same as the original. Even the beginning is the same. Honesty this just feels like the original with a few names changed and little added to the little.

Glitches First of all the opening happens twice. When Littlestar asks for Lightfeather no one comes up. If you talk to the medicine cat twice then try to make the apprentice a warrior they will only say bored.

What I would like to see: I would really like to see you add a specific story line. The original has to be general, and have variety because it is a sandbox game. However you, you can do whatever you want with your remix. You can tell the story of Littleclan. Give each and every cat their own backstory, personality, and time you can get to spend with them. Give them all set names and appearances. Something that made me wonder is why Lightfeather is chosen to be deputy. You can't just force the leader to pick a cat with no explanation. Maybe have a little prolog chappter with Littlestar and Lightfeather hanging out and doing something together, so the player understands why they chose Lightfeather. The game also needs more story. Right now it is very boring. You are leader, Lightfeather is your deputy which never comes up again, whatevertail becomes a warrior which you didn't even make a preset name for like you did for lightfeather and this never comes up again, you go to the gathering where you are introduced to riverclan's sickness problem, this does come up again as medcat says it is a success, then with no foreshadowing a cat gets their chest infected. This story is completely lacks any bonding moments and any reason you should remember any of the cats names or care about any of the cats. You need moments that show the cats hanging out with each other, showing emotion, showing personality, giving you time to get to know the cats and reasons to care about the game. You should also add music throughout the game.

Tallpaw warrior ceremony: This part was hilarious. Littlestar was like “Tallpaw, you will now be known as A very tall cat”. The looks on very ones faces were priceless as they confusly said A very tall cat? Only for Littlestar to be like “XD just kidding. Your real warrior name is Tallblade.”
Okay is it bad that my favorite scene came from half premade random generator half giving a joke answer. I feel like you need to add in scenes like this if you want your game to stand out. Littlestar them self doesn't need to be a jokester however one of the clan cats should.

Overall: This is a barebones remix. It only changes threeish names. My favorite part is something that could have happened in the original. You really need to add more of your own touch to it. The original is general as it is sandboxy. However you have a chance to tell your own story about Littleclan and the cats in it. I give this remix a 2/10 as all it changed from the original is a few names that only limited the player's freedom.

I would like a review!
Link to Project: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/141684191/
Any sections you want me to review: Review the entire project, please. It's not much.
Anything else: This project doesn't have the best plot, but as a game, I'm proud of it.

Id like to give a rating.
I Rate this shop 10/10 Because its Perfect.

Happyprincessgirl wrote:

Id like a good song for my warrior cats game.
Its The Song That Will Play whenever The player is outside.
Im Going for A Bouncy Mood In the Song. Kind of A Mix of Happy and exited. Not Fast, Though. With Speed I Want it to Kind of be happy.
I Want it to be kind of happy and sticato. (Ive said that its kind of happy three times. ) Id Like it to be good Quality. (Of course. )

Oh. And also, Can it please Be lyricless? You Can Make it have lyrics If Making it lyricless erases alot of your work.

@Happyprincessgirl
Don't worry, 95% of the music I listen to do not have lyrics so it didn't set me back at all. I have 5 found songs that could work.
Ever Grande city - Pokemon Ruby and Sapphire
Sogwood Forest map - The legendary Starfy
Minigames - The legendary starfy
Job clear - Pokemon mystery dungeon explorers of sky
Pelipper Island - Pokemon mystery dungeon explorers of sky

@Happyprincessgirl
Crystalstar is a grey cat with stripes. Pretty much the 8th costume in the 5th sprite in the littleclan game you asked me to review.
Personality:Crystalstar is laid back most of the time, however when times are tough she can get serious. She enjoys teaching others, and helping them improve. She is somewhat forgetful and a bit of a procrastinator. Crystalstar loves hunting. She always tires to go after squirrels as it is her favorite food. She will try to stop other cats from eating the squirrels in the fresh kill pile if she can. Giving other cats a squirrel is a sign she really likes them. Crystalstar likes to listen to others input on decisions before making them. She is very spiritual and always says thanks, and goodnight to all the cats in Starclan before she goes to bed. Crystalstar enjoys change and tries to embrace it if she can. In fact sometimes she tries to bring it. Her deepest wish is that one day all the clans will be able to live together in harmony. This desire sometimes gets her into trouble as she can be a little to trusting of cats she hardly knows. She occasionally holds festival (parties? Whatever they call it in warrior cats) that bring a day of hanging out with another clan in peace in hopes that some of the cats will become friends.

Backstory:Crystalkit loved both of her parents, and enjoyed trying to impress them. She liked playing games with other kits, even if she lost a lot the most important thing to her was having fun. She enjoyed playing with all the other cats in the clan. She was thrilled when she got her mentor, Goldstream(What I'm using for Goldstar's warrior name). They shared many good times together. Training, teaching, and relaxing while watching the sunset. Even when Crystalpaw became a warrior Crystalflower, she remained friends with Goldstream. They became best friends. Goldstream became a deputy (what happened to Lightfeather?), and eventually a leader. She chose Crystalflower to be her deputy. When Goldstar used up her last life to save the life of one of her clanmates Crystalflower was in tears for a day. Crystalstar resents the one who Goldstar saved as she feels that they killed her best friend. However Crystalstar tries to hide it. It took Crystalstar two days to pick her deputy. Crystalstar has been the leader of Littleclan ever since.

Operation: Mouse vs. Aliens
Gameplay:It has the potential to be fun. However it completely lacks mood and purpose. The blue fusion drive is pretty easy to dodge. You just have to slip between the cracks. The grey fusion drive can be hard depending on where you start. If it attacks into you, you become trapped and are doomed. However if you can you can just make little Us to dodge the bullets which is pretty fun. For the green fusion drive I go into the corners and dodge from there. I like how they are set up. They create small gaps that require skill to go through. The fire fusion drive was sort of a mix of the grey and the green fusion drives. I usually went in Us however sometimes I would have to slip through cracks. The tractor beam only becomes an obstical when the grey or fire fusion drives are in play. The Easter egg is the hardest of all attacks to dodge. It is possible by constantly moving however the game quickly becomes difficult as bullets start being shot. A problem with changing fusion drives is that the combination of bullets on the screen can easily trap you, and make it impossible to dodge. You can easily dodge all of the attacks. You can hide in one of the upper corners, or you can quickly move your mouse off the project. If done fast enough the border won't detect that you moved out of the stage. Using this method hiding is easy but coming back out is hard.

Gameover Screens:The last word screens were great. All of them had a nice touch of humor to them. I like the Easter egg's one where it's like “… How”. Still it's just great that during your final moments you are just worried about not writing to your mom or your friend being “Okay! I got your last words down.” instead of fear. However I don't understand how dinos being alive causes the engines to fail. If they were dead would the engines not fail? How did they cause the engines to fail? Did they weight to much? Did they smash the engine? Did they paradox the engine? Did they enjoy an engine sandwich?

Visuals:The visuals are descent. They aren't HD however they do get the job done. The graphics are nice to look at.

Secrets:I found the great secret in the tractor beam. I like how you added secrets to your game. The Easter egg gives a what even? Ending message which I feel is very fitting. I also enjoy the Tractor beam secret. Now to tell all my friends. Hey everyone I stumbled upon an amazing secret! XD There, that should do the trick.

What I would like to see: I would like to see a purpose added into the game. Whether it be a bossfight or a bullethell where the goal is to get the longest survival time. Music while playing would be a good addition. I would like to see the reason why you are fighting aliens. I know they are invading the earth but why? Did a world leader eat the alien's last waffle?

Overall: This game has the potential to be fun. However the lack of a goal in combination with a lack of music leaves the game feeling empty. The secrets were a nice touch. In fact your the 4th person (maybe 5th, one of them is sort of borderline) I've ever seen on Scratch to put secrets into a project. I give this game a 4/10 for being a bullethell with secrets and no goal.

Hello! I'm here from the Starry Night Review shop - I believe that you asked for a shop review! To do so, I first need to order something from your shop so that I can review this shop. So, I would like to order:

Link to Project: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxyberklee.flo.org/projects/95239808/
Any sections you want me to review: I would like you to review the art and tutorial, please!
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as your project is in two parts or that you like cats?) Nope!

Thanks a bunch!

How to draw Vector Eyes
Art: The first slide could use some improvement. The completely circles with gradients does give a nice effect on the letter t however it makes letters look ugly such as the D. I suggest remaking most of the letters making them only 1 object (or two for the letters with holes). The eyes look pretty okay. I originally didn't like how the eyes look however they look much better on the person than they do in isolation. The person on the last slide is a mess. Their hair does not look good as the top part has a gradient in it that gives off weird shading which makes it look ugly. The eyebrows on the person make me wonder, why do they have blond eyebrows and red hair? You didn't even follow your own advice on what color the eyebrows should be. The lips are a bit inconstant. The bottom part is a different color than the top and it is really noticeable. The shirt is completely unshaded which makes a huge contrast to the style of the rest of the girl. Also where are her arms? It appears that she has none. The art gives off a serious look.

Tutorial: The color pallet advice is really helpful. How to fill in the eye with a gradient was very detailed and easy to understand. However I don't think that deleting the color pallet is the best idea. I suggest grouping the pallet, shrinking it smaller than the eye, putting it behind the eye then grouping it with the eye colored part in case you ever need the gradient again. Adding the iris and the white of the eye were easy to understand. The eyelashes part was sort of vague. You said to reshape it into an eyelash like shape. What exactly is the shape. For yours it seems to be a crescent that outlines the upper right part of the eye. And again for the eyebrows. You never explain how to reshape it. What exactly do you reshape it? I feel that the level of detail in this tutorial is inconsistent. You went from extremely clear in the beginning to more general when the eye hairs part came up.

Controls: The the space bar is okay, I wish that you added a way to go back to previous slides. This can get annoying if someone needs to go back because they either have to flip through 10 slides (not that they know this, and they could potentially go past it forcing them to flip through again) or they have to go into the editor, and switch the costume from there. I suggest adding in A,D,left arrow and right arrow to flip between the slides.

OverallThis tutorial is very clear in the basics of eye making, then gets vaguer when it goes over to eye hairs. This tutorial can be followed by anyone who knows how to reshape and create circles. It's movement is okay however I wish there was a way to move backwards. I give this eye tutorial a 3.5/10 for being an okay tutorial that lacks a way to go backwards.

muellly wrote:

How to draw Vector Eyes
Art: The first slide could use some improvement. The completely circles with gradients does give a nice effect on the letter t however it makes letters look ugly such as the D. I suggest remaking most of the letters making them only 1 object (or two for the letters with holes). The eyes look pretty okay. I originally didn't like how the eyes look however they look much better on the person than they do in isolation. The person on the last slide is a mess. Their hair does not look good as the top part has a gradient in it that gives off weird shading which makes it look ugly. The eyebrows on the person make me wonder, why do they have blond eyebrows and red hair? You didn't even follow your own advice on what color the eyebrows should be. The lips are a bit inconstant. The bottom part is a different color than the top and it is really noticeable. The shirt is completely unshaded which makes a huge contrast to the style of the rest of the girl. Also where are her arms? It appears that she has none. The art gives off a serious look.

Tutorial: The color pallet advice is really helpful. How to fill in the eye with a gradient was very detailed and easy to understand. However I don't think that deleting the color pallet is the best idea. I suggest grouping the pallet, shrinking it smaller than the eye, putting it behind the eye then grouping it with the eye colored part in case you ever need the gradient again. Adding the iris and the white of the eye were easy to understand. The eyelashes part was sort of vague. You said to reshape it into an eyelash like shape. What exactly is the shape. For yours it seems to be a crescent that outlines the upper right part of the eye. And again for the eyebrows. You never explain how to reshape it. What exactly do you reshape it? I feel that the level of detail in this tutorial is inconsistent. You went from extremely clear in the beginning to more general when the eye hairs part came up.

Controls: The the space bar is okay, I wish that you added a way to go back to previous slides. This can get annoying if someone needs to go back because they either have to flip through 10 slides (not that they know this, and they could potentially go past it forcing them to flip through again) or they have to go into the editor, and switch the costume from there. I suggest adding in A,D,left arrow and right arrow to flip between the slides.

OverallThis tutorial is very clear in the basics of eye making, then gets vaguer when it goes over to eye hairs. This tutorial can be followed by anyone who knows how to reshape and create circles. It's movement is okay however I wish there was a way to move backwards. I give this eye tutorial a 3.5/10 for being an okay tutorial that lacks a way to go backwards.

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What type of Item you ordered: A project review
Friendliness on a scale of 1-10: 3
How fast your order was noticed (1-10): 9
How fast it was completed (1-10): 9
How well the order was completed overall (1-10): 7
Comments: I realize that I could have gone into more detail making the project, but saying that the art was a mess and looked ugly did not seem very nice.

muellly wrote:

@Happyprincessgirl
Crystalstar is a grey cat with stripes. Pretty much the 8th costume in the 5th sprite in the littleclan game you asked me to review.
Personality:Crystalstar is laid back most of the time, however when times are tough she can get serious. She enjoys teaching others, and helping them improve. She is somewhat forgetful and a bit of a procrastinator. Crystalstar loves hunting. She always tires to go after squirrels as it is her favorite food. She will try to stop other cats from eating the squirrels in the fresh kill pile if she can. Giving other cats a squirrel is a sign she really likes them. Crystalstar likes to listen to others input on decisions before making them. She is very spiritual and always says thanks, and goodnight to all the cats in Starclan before she goes to bed. Crystalstar enjoys change and tries to embrace it if she can. In fact sometimes she tries to bring it. Her deepest wish is that one day all the clans will be able to live together in harmony. This desire sometimes gets her into trouble as she can be a little to trusting of cats she hardly knows. She occasionally holds festival (parties? Whatever they call it in warrior cats) that bring a day of hanging out with another clan in peace in hopes that some of the cats will become friends.

Backstory:Crystalkit loved both of her parents, and enjoyed trying to impress them. She liked playing games with other kits, even if she lost a lot the most important thing to her was having fun. She enjoyed playing with all the other cats in the clan. She was thrilled when she got her mentor, Goldstream(What I'm using for Goldstar's warrior name). They shared many good times together. Training, teaching, and relaxing while watching the sunset. Even when Crystalpaw became a warrior Crystalflower, she remained friends with Goldstream. They became best friends. Goldstream became a deputy (what happened to Lightfeather?), and eventually a leader. She chose Crystalflower to be her deputy. When Goldstar used up her last life to save the life of one of her clanmates Crystalflower was in tears for a day. Crystalstar resents the one who Goldstar saved as she feels that they killed her best friend. However Crystalstar tries to hide it. It took Crystalstar two days to pick her deputy. Crystalstar has been the leader of Littleclan ever since.

(Just To let you know, Goldstars Warrior name Was Goldpelt.) With Her Personality, Of The Festival Thingy Part, I Dont know what Its Called Either but I think It Suits That She Holds A Gathering In Her Own Territory When Its Not The Full moon.

muellly wrote:

@Happyprincessgirl
Crystalstar is a grey cat with stripes. Pretty much the 8th costume in the 5th sprite in the littleclan game you asked me to review.
Personality:Crystalstar is laid back most of the time, however when times are tough she can get serious. She enjoys teaching others, and helping them improve. She is somewhat forgetful and a bit of a procrastinator. Crystalstar loves hunting. She always tires to go after squirrels as it is her favorite food. She will try to stop other cats from eating the squirrels in the fresh kill pile if she can. Giving other cats a squirrel is a sign she really likes them. Crystalstar likes to listen to others input on decisions before making them. She is very spiritual and always says thanks, and goodnight to all the cats in Starclan before she goes to bed. Crystalstar enjoys change and tries to embrace it if she can. In fact sometimes she tries to bring it. Her deepest wish is that one day all the clans will be able to live together in harmony. This desire sometimes gets her into trouble as she can be a little to trusting of cats she hardly knows. She occasionally holds festival (parties? Whatever they call it in warrior cats) that bring a day of hanging out with another clan in peace in hopes that some of the cats will become friends.

Backstory:Crystalkit loved both of her parents, and enjoyed trying to impress them. She liked playing games with other kits, even if she lost a lot the most important thing to her was having fun. She enjoyed playing with all the other cats in the clan. She was thrilled when she got her mentor, Goldstream(What I'm using for Goldstar's warrior name). They shared many good times together. Training, teaching, and relaxing while watching the sunset. Even when Crystalpaw became a warrior Crystalflower, she remained friends with Goldstream. They became best friends. Goldstream became a deputy (what happened to Lightfeather?), and eventually a leader. She chose Crystalflower to be her deputy. When Goldstar used up her last life to save the life of one of her clanmates Crystalflower was in tears for a day. Crystalstar resents the one who Goldstar saved as she feels that they killed her best friend. However Crystalstar tries to hide it. It took Crystalstar two days to pick her deputy. Crystalstar has been the leader of Littleclan ever since.

What Happend To Lightfeather Was When He Was Revealed To Be Evil, He Was Replaced with Goldpelt, A Loyal And Honest Warrior. They Knew She Was Honest Because When She Was An Apprentice When She Got Caught Talking to a riverclan Kit, She Told the truth.

Thank you for reviewing my project! I will take notes for my “sequel”. I give this shop a 99/100 because you reviewed every last corner of my project. However, some parts were a bit too hard to understand. (The Us part, what did that mean?)

Anyways, some comments:

(They crashed into the engine.)
(The fire alien is also a secret.)

BDDP wrote:

Thank you for reviewing my project! I will take notes for my “sequel”. I give this shop a 99/100 because you reviewed every last corner of my project. However, some parts were a bit too hard to understand. (The Us part, what did that mean?)

Anyways, some comments:

(They crashed into the engine.)
(The fire alien is also a secret.)

When I meant Us I meant I moved in a U shape. Sorry for the late reply.

Anyway it has been a while since anyone has posted here so I guess this reply fills this thread with determinbumpion! Bumpination! Some combination of the words determination and bump I guess XD .

Looks like you could use a bump, so here.