Lego-Lovin-Program wrote:

Additional Ability for 3R1C:

He can reform his body parts into anything he wishes, such as weapons, tools, utilities, etc.

Is it approved?

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Additional abilities for Creation Three:

Anti-Aware Resistance - Resists Anti-Aware Generators. Creation Three is unaffected by Anti-Aware Generators, EXCEPT that it can only reform one limb a turn if it forgoes combat actions. (Creation Three, under the affect of an AAG, is only able to reform a limb if it doesn't make a combat action.)

Redundant Receptors - If Creation Three is divided into multiple pieces by outside means (non-allied characters) and does not die, both portions are capable of fighting and moving.

Back-Up Capacitors - If Creation Three is critically damaged on a turn, it is capable of functioning as an uninjured character for 3 of its turns, and then spontaneously dies. If it escapes during this period, Creation Three does not die.

Lego-Lovin-Program wrote:

Additional Ability for 3R1C:

He can reform his body parts into anything he wishes, such as weapons, tools, utilities, etc.

Is it approved?

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

In this case, both Paradox could do it, but it only had effect on a spherical area around him. And he was an early character, so he wouldn't have been accepted nowadays.

Also, work harder on the rest of the application. You can't have a backstory in four words!

the_force wrote:

Additional power for Mara

Intangibility Variation

• can only phase objects in air that are not touching any other solid objects

• can only phase objects for 3 seconds

• her eyes turn red when she phases an object
  

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 8
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 9
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): animation and smooth vector art
Will you follow the rules? ye

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Additional abilities for Creation Three:

Anti-Aware Resistance - Resists Anti-Aware Generators. Creation Three is barely affected by Anti-Aware Generators, simply halving its action count. (Creation Three can either move, fight, or reform one limb while under the effect of an AAG a comment.)

Why can't C3 just pick up a weapon and use it like any other?

With Lore:
Creation Three's whole mind is the damaged Intelligence Core. Some of the damage done slowed down its processor speed and complexity, however it was supplemented using a secondary system. This gave C3 similar processor speed to P1, along with complexity of thought, but it did not replace the peripheral for using non-integrated weapons and tools. Therefore, if C3 tries to use one, it'll return an error and do nothing.

Without Lore:
It's on its bio, and it's the only thing that stops it from being grossly OP.

Creation Three Rules & Weaknesses
- Unable to use non-integrated weapons. (This includes artillery and other non-hand equipment. So you don't find C3 in a tank.) (see above for lore)
- Creation Three will not improve itself, nor willingly let itself be improved. Any attempt to improve it by altering it (Giving it armor or a vehicle is different) will immediately trigger its Preservation Mode, where it will immediately reform into the most lethal thing possible and try to annihilate the subject. Irreversible, only deactivates if subject escapes or dies. (Coded in as a safeguard against it dying as Prototype One did, among a few other minor things.)
- Can only reform attached limbs (Duh.)
- Can heal only outside of an RP thread, but it can regrow limbs in said time. (Balance reasons, and because said healing ability is to mimic organic characters)
- Only dies if critically damaged (Intelligence Core destruction, or destruction of torso region, intelligence core in head, torso contains backup parts and guidelines for behavior) (Comes with cybernetic existence, can't destroy a computer by smashing a mouse.)
- Paradoxes are the bane of its existence, stopping it from acting AT ALL on one turn, but granting it immunity for 3 turns. (See above, rolled in with the damage (depth is too much and it lacks a advanced peripheral for detecting and ignoring it.))
- Can see metal through non-organic, non-metal objects (Metal objects glow for it, organic objects black out this glow, so it can't tell between overlapping metal objects and a single object.
- Immune to hacking, as C3 is an isolated system with no data ports accessible during action. (Wasn't listed as a weakness, and because Prototype One did not have said weakness, partially because of the Intelligence Core's form.)
- Must start with claws for its hands and talon-like feet for its feet. (It'd get rekt by any jumpy person if it had weapons out while it was randomly walking around. Seriously.)
- Creation Three is slowed in water, and gets half the actions in it. (This does not stack with AAG's, however exhibits same behavior as above proposed change) (electronics don't play well with water.)

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

the_force wrote:

Additional power for Mara

Intangibility Variation

• can only phase objects in air that are not touching any other solid objects

• can only phase objects for 3 seconds

• her eyes turn red when she phases an object
  

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 8
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 9
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): animation and smooth vector art
Will you follow the rules? ye

Alright, but make it her weapon that does, that, instead of her.

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

makethebrainhappy wrote:

I have a character that can see into the future, so that power is kind of taken

braxbroscratcher wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Additional abilities for Creation Three:

Anti-Aware Resistance - Resists Anti-Aware Generators. Creation Three is barely affected by Anti-Aware Generators, simply halving its action count. (Creation Three can either move, fight, or reform one limb while under the effect of an AAG a comment.)

This is the main one I need; Since a catch of playing C3 is that it can only use integrated weapons, because its special ability counts as an Aware one, it cannot reform its limbs while under the effect of an AAG, which is literally a death sentence, because C3 can only start a thread with a standard humanoid form. This change would also even it out with other Aware characters a little, while still heavily penalizing it. Now before you say this:

Why can't C3 just pick up a weapon and use it like any other?

I'll explain.

With Lore:
Creation Three's whole mind is the damaged Intelligence Core. Some of the damage done slowed down its processor speed and complexity, however it was supplemented using a secondary system. This gave C3 similar processor speed to P1, along with complexity of thought, but it did not replace the peripheral for using non-integrated weapons and tools. Therefore, if C3 tries to use one, it'll return an error and do nothing.

Without Lore:
It's on its bio, and it's the only thing that stops it from being grossly OP.

Anyway, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that now is the time we need to list our rule lists for our active characters.

Split's rules are here or in the last few pages of the last thread, so I'll leave those out, but C3:

Creation Three Rules & Weaknesses
- Unable to use non-integrated weapons. (This includes artillery and other non-hand equipment. So you don't find C3 in a tank.) (see above for lore)
- Creation Three will not improve itself, nor willingly let itself be improved. Any attempt to improve it by altering it (Giving it armor or a vehicle is different) will immediately trigger its Preservation Mode, where it will immediately reform into the most lethal thing possible and try to annihilate the subject. Irreversible, only deactivates if subject escapes or dies. (Coded in as a safeguard against it dying as Prototype One did, among a few other minor things.)
- Can only reform attached limbs (Duh.)
- Can heal only outside of an RP thread, but it can regrow limbs in said time. (Balance reasons, and because said healing ability is to mimic organic characters)
- Only dies if critically damaged (Intelligence Core destruction, or destruction of torso region, intelligence core in head, torso contains backup parts and guidelines for behavior) (Comes with cybernetic existence, can't destroy a computer by smashing a mouse.)
- Paradoxes are the bane of its existence, stopping it from acting AT ALL on one turn, but granting it immunity for 3 turns. (See above, rolled in with the damage (depth is too much and it lacks a advanced peripheral for detecting and ignoring it.))
- Can see metal through non-organic, non-metal objects (Metal objects glow for it, organic objects black out this glow, so it can't tell between overlapping metal objects and a single object.
- Immune to hacking, as C3 is an isolated system with no data ports accessible during action. (Wasn't listed as a weakness, and because Prototype One did not have said weakness, partially because of the Intelligence Core's form.)
- Must start with claws for its hands and talon-like feet for its feet. (It'd get rekt by any jumpy person if it had weapons out while it was randomly walking around. Seriously.)
- Creation Three is slowed in water, and gets half the actions in it. (This does not stack with AAG's, however exhibits same behavior as above proposed change) (electronics don't play well with water.)

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

Fine, no powers and no weakness

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

the_force wrote:

Additional power for Mara

Intangibility Variation

• can only phase objects in air that are not touching any other solid objects

• can only phase objects for 3 seconds

• her eyes turn red when she phases an object
  

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 8
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 9
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): animation and smooth vector art
Will you follow the rules? ye

Alright, but make it her weapon that does, that, instead of her.

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

Fine, no powers and no weakness

Just be original with your powers, like telekinesis over rubber, or the ability to control worms, or the ability to shoot laser beams out your eyeballs. As long as there's a way to easily block or dodge those lasers or rubber bands of death, though.

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

makethebrainhappy wrote:

I have a character that can see into the future, so that power is kind of taken

Wait, WHAT!?!? How was that ever accepted? No time travel or prophesies of any kind is rule number 2 of Super Hero RP. If that character is still alive, remove that ability right now.

braxbroscratcher wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Additional abilities for Creation Three:

Anti-Aware Resistance - Resists Anti-Aware Generators. Creation Three is barely affected by Anti-Aware Generators, simply halving its action count. (Creation Three can either move, fight, or reform one limb while under the effect of an AAG a comment.)

This is the main one I need; Since a catch of playing C3 is that it can only use integrated weapons, because its special ability counts as an Aware one, it cannot reform its limbs while under the effect of an AAG, which is literally a death sentence, because C3 can only start a thread with a standard humanoid form. This change would also even it out with other Aware characters a little, while still heavily penalizing it. Now before you say this:

Why can't C3 just pick up a weapon and use it like any other?

I'll explain.

With Lore:
Creation Three's whole mind is the damaged Intelligence Core. Some of the damage done slowed down its processor speed and complexity, however it was supplemented using a secondary system. This gave C3 similar processor speed to P1, along with complexity of thought, but it did not replace the peripheral for using non-integrated weapons and tools. Therefore, if C3 tries to use one, it'll return an error and do nothing.

Without Lore:
It's on its bio, and it's the only thing that stops it from being grossly OP.

Anyway, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that now is the time we need to list our rule lists for our active characters.

Split's rules are here or in the last few pages of the last thread, so I'll leave those out, but C3:

Creation Three Rules & Weaknesses
- Unable to use non-integrated weapons. (This includes artillery and other non-hand equipment. So you don't find C3 in a tank.) (see above for lore)
- Creation Three will not improve itself, nor willingly let itself be improved. Any attempt to improve it by altering it (Giving it armor or a vehicle is different) will immediately trigger its Preservation Mode, where it will immediately reform into the most lethal thing possible and try to annihilate the subject. Irreversible, only deactivates if subject escapes or dies. (Coded in as a safeguard against it dying as Prototype One did, among a few other minor things.)
- Can only reform attached limbs (Duh.)
- Can heal only outside of an RP thread, but it can regrow limbs in said time. (Balance reasons, and because said healing ability is to mimic organic characters)
- Only dies if critically damaged (Intelligence Core destruction, or destruction of torso region, intelligence core in head, torso contains backup parts and guidelines for behavior) (Comes with cybernetic existence, can't destroy a computer by smashing a mouse.)
- Paradoxes are the bane of its existence, stopping it from acting AT ALL on one turn, but granting it immunity for 3 turns. (See above, rolled in with the damage (depth is too much and it lacks a advanced peripheral for detecting and ignoring it.))
- Can see metal through non-organic, non-metal objects (Metal objects glow for it, organic objects black out this glow, so it can't tell between overlapping metal objects and a single object.
- Immune to hacking, as C3 is an isolated system with no data ports accessible during action. (Wasn't listed as a weakness, and because Prototype One did not have said weakness, partially because of the Intelligence Core's form.)
- Must start with claws for its hands and talon-like feet for its feet. (It'd get rekt by any jumpy person if it had weapons out while it was randomly walking around. Seriously.)
- Creation Three is slowed in water, and gets half the actions in it. (This does not stack with AAG's, however exhibits same behavior as above proposed change) (electronics don't play well with water.)

Man, RPing is getting complicated. Why don't you just pick a simple, weak power and roll with it, bro? XD

But in all seriousness, it's accepted.

Connectation wrote:

talkingtoilet8 wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Connectation wrote:

How active are you? (1 (Once a month) - 10 (I am always on)) : 9
How committed are you? (1 (Not really bothered) - 10 (I will not rest until my task is done)) : 8
How well do you work in a team? (1-10): 10
What are your skills? (Art, Animation, Ideas, Coding etc.): Music/coding
Will you follow the rules? Yes

Name: The Shard
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Personality: A teenager willing to help. Smart, comical
Appearance: Black vest with black mask with white stripes
Backstory: Family died in fire
Talents and skills: Bo staff
Super Powers (if any): See future
Weaknesses: Time travelers change what he sees
Other info: None

I'm gonna overstep my bounds and reject this for the ability to see the future. Future sight is banned as you could literally dictate how a whole thread played out.

How about gravity manipulation

Pretty sure that's taken. Standard stuff has been taken years ago, think outside the box. If it takes 2 words to sum it up perfectly, and a comic-book hero has used it, it's probably taken or banned.

Fine, no powers and no weakness

Just be original with your powers, like telekinesis over rubber, or the ability to control worms, or the ability to shoot laser beams out your eyeballs. As long as there's a way to easily block or dodge those lasers or rubber bands of death, though.

I don't want any is it accepted?

braxbroscratcher wrote:

Name: Discors Pugnare (Phil Keplin)
Gender: Male (Shut up about the name, it's flipping Latin. Okay?)
Age: 19
Personality: Orderly, passive, and calm
Appearance: A tall human-like creature with randomly recoloring crystals on his back; usually wears jeans, a belt, a chestplate, and overly large spiked steel gauntlets.
Backstory: A ordinary man, Discors used to be named Phil. When he was 15, the Collians came to Earth and killed his family, along with many others.. Fortunately for him, his orderly nature made him able to harness the chaos around him, allowing him to save himself.
Talents and skills: Organizing, stabilizing unstable situations, and mastery of basic unarmed combat.
Super Powers (if any): Chaotic Bombardment (Ability to make one's senses never agree, even with themselves. Causes dizzyness and confusion. Lasts one of the target's comments. After expiration, target is immune to Chaotic Bombardment for 1 comment. After use, Chaotic Bombardment is on cooldown for 2 of Discors' comments. While under the effect of Chaotic Bombardment, the target EITHER takes a passive action (Anything but a combat action) or a combat action.), Minor Entropy Distillation (Explosions that Discors is barely affected by get stabilized and stopped.)
Weaknesses: Cannot use firearms, major explosions (Explosions that Minor Entropy Distillation doesn't work on), radiation, chaotic behavior, sarcasm (Confuses him for 1 turn, effectively forcing him to use Chaotic Bombardment on himself; however, this does not put CB on cooldown. After escaping confusion, he is granted immunity to this effect for 3 comments (of his own).)
Other info: Gonna get this guy ready for when Split gets rekt. (Because tbh, he's too fun to last xD Just like Prototype One was.)